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This was an old bio but ok

   When Redwar was young she loved to explore the outdoors. She was a curious pony and decided to cross  the forbidden circle but her parents stopped her. They said it was dangerous and shouldn't go past that line. Redwar being redwar listened to her mother and  father and decided to go to a field where she met her friend Black Feathers. Both redwar and black feathers were competitive ponies and loved to race and jump in the streams.

     One day redwar noticed a  pony  in the sky it appeared to have wings. Redwar told her mother MOM look a flying pony! “There is no such thing as flying ponies” Her mother replied it's all in your head! Redwar was disappointed she really did believe there were flying ponies. Don't you think there is a chance  there could be actual ponies with wings? Red asked. No honey flying ponies do not exist. Redwar decided to sit by the stream and grabbed a stick and poked the dirt near by. As she was poking the dirt the reflection of a familiar pony appeared. It was black feathers. Black feathers was worried about red She asked her if something was conflicting her. Redwar just felt like there was something more out of their border but she wasn't allowed to cross that line. Black feathers conforted her and told her that there might be a strong reason why we cannot cross the line. Red didn't know what to think at the time but black feathers just told her to follow her and so they both ran to a large tree and they played around and chased each other. When they go back home red falls asleep and when she is awake she is an adult (Represents that years have passed by)  When she got out of the tent.Her parents and friends were making her get ready to become the wife of the new chief Morning Star. Red was against this she didn't want to get married she wanted to be free. But that didn't happen. after a few months   later  Ahyoka was born.  Redwar loved her dearly she would tell her stories of the flying horses that would save them. Ahyoka was thrilled with the wonderful stories her mother told her. They went to the stream and they both drew these ponies with wings. Around that time they heard a loud sound above them when they looked up they saw a pony crashed on their bubble. Redwar immediately told Ahyoka to run back to the hut. When she did Redwar ran as fast as she could to the edge of the bubble she knew there was something going on they were trapped in what they thought was a bright pink sky. When she got to the line she stopped for a second and crossed the line When she crossed the tall grass she was paralyzed for what she saw. Meanwhile the salmon coated pony tried to fly again. She flew as fast as she could. But later collapsed and fell to the ground. The monsters waited patiently for her to wake up so they could attack

Red war noticed the salmon ponies fall and she didn't know what to do. These monsters were staring at her waiting for her to get out. The bubble became weaker due to reds fear.  At that time her husband appeared and gave her a necklace at the end of the necklace was a glowing stone. This will protect you now go! Everyone is safe! You can't go back to the hut there is not enough time

The monsters will find everyone and kill them if you do go! Find help and get back as soon as possible. I will distract them as much as I can Now go!

At that time Ahyoka appeared she was following her father and he grabbed her and put her on her mother's back. Red ran towards the salmon colored pony. At the same time the salmon pony was getting up, she was about to fly off but a monster barely grabbed her from a feather and vaporized it. Metal screamed. When red approached her the stone glowed more than ever and formed a bubble around the salmon colored pony and it turned a metallic stone to a metal feather and attached it to her body. FOllow me the salmon colored pony said. I know ooa safe spot! They hid behind the curtains of the waterfalls and stayed there to dry off and be safe! So who are you? Red asked the pony. I am Metal Petal she replied. I come from a large cloud city in the sky. But the ponies grew frightened when these monsters appeared around our bubble. This caused the bubble to faint to nothing. The griffons only wanted to take away our crystals. There were only two that were retrieved. How many elements were you guys able to find? Redwar “none, I didn't know we had these” “ALL bubbles have 7. One is super powerful  and the other six are strong enough to make a new bubble. But ponies need to get over their fear of monsters and fight.” also that necklace around your neck must be an element ! What! Red replied Yes we need to go back and find the rest the six are usually in a circle and the main crystal is in the center. They went back and recovered 3 elements they put them on each other. Black feather was fighting off monsters so they ran towards her to give her the 3rd crystal. Red zapped the monsters near her and gave her the 3rd crystal. This will protect you said red. Ahyoka found the fourth and Metal petal found the fifth. They gathered all the ponies with the crystals and they made a new bubble which destroyed all monsters near that area . Redwar was free to travel and help ponies from other areas  and that's exactly what she did .
Personality: Red is a bold adventurous pony whom follows what her heart desires


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